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Two
​by Daniel Carden Nemo

Bildens Äkthet 

- after Melanie Challenger 
Ascend and the feel of air,
descend and the feel of air, 
what turns the strobe light on? 

In the dream I’m in the same room 
the other me is sleeping in 
and everything, 
down to the light and shadows, 
appears to be identical, 
perhaps just slightly tilted,
as though refracted 
through a pane glossed over 
by half-heard subterranean rhythms, 
and one of us is now 
only a mirror figure 
on a scale other than the original, 
moved by an invisible hand 
along a predetermined track,
a human breath collection apparatus                                    
gliding in and out of walls                                            
ushering life forces through.

When I speak, he 
speaks: 

I, who soar high into the sky
no longer subject to the laws of motion 
but to their echo, across 
the horizontal approximation 
from where I can see 
the four corners of the world, 

and reach them, shall keep 
a weather eye on everything
.    
Note: Bildens Äkthet is Swedish for Authenticity of Image

Convention as Means of Repression 

​​All warnings to guard or refill it ignored, what could restore it to health?
The living reservoir’s dried up to dust, 

a residue that yields a different kind of time flooding the remainder, 
an altered medium, circular yet hollow-bellied like a roof without a temple.

Algorithms may relax the nerves and muscle tissue through the body 
but emotions are as dry as the salt mountain’s thirst.

You want to dive in and turn it to stream.

The choice lies in the act of measuring—is the product of some frank, 
dispassionate inspection, a lucent audit of your standing 

amid the same choreography of commerce and condition, 
flowing as it does from one vanishing point to another, endlessly, 

like a river of momentum, of contracts framed as the myth of getting somewhere
when in fact you fell upon it 

and still your thoughts, like minerals that collect and boil away  
along the far banks of your awareness, 

drift inevitably toward that stream 
and blur into the current so fully they forget their origin.

Alone on the water, the water reflects nothing back. 
The small boat setting out from the large boat left behind 

is less a metaphor than a decision. Because acute, transactive instead of gifting, 
life stays blind and restless, 

the loss of world inevitable, mere instrument 
in the service of something lying on the wrong side 

of whatever line is drawn--
a more complete view entails a center without angles or degrees.

Ashore you watch the morning light come in through the shutters. 
To take back the world and know it in yourself 

a stepping out into the open is required, a reaching beyond a paralysis of dances.
The ground shakes and moves under your feet, the edge is always now.
Notes:
Emotions are as dry as the salt mountain’s thirst - in reference to The Thirst of the Salt Mountain by Marin Sorescu
The small boat setting out from the large boat left behind - in reference to Under Pressure by Tomas Tranströmer
 

Daniel Carden Nemo
Daniel Carden Nemo’s work has been long-listed for the Best Literary Translations (Deep Vellum) and has appeared in RHINO, Full Stop, Magma Poetry, Sontag Mag, Off the Coast, and elsewhere. 

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